by Jenny_Jackson
Jenny. This had the makings of a great story with the horror and the dark and foreboding ending. I really enjoyed it. Good luck with the contest!
Thsi should have been labeled as non-erotic instead of erotic horror. Where was the eroticism?
The imagery was awesome Jenny. That was really creepy. Just a tip, the italics are <I> </I>...I had the same problem with them ;)
Jenny, That was one good horror story. The language you wrote made me feel I was in the inn listening to them talk. During the fighting and burning, I couldn't help but think of 'Night of the living dead'. Very well written and a well deserved 5
With respect
DG Hear
A cracking good little horror tale. Your use of dialect and mood setting are excellent. Good luck in the contest.
That was awesome JJ! I really enjoyed the visualizations from this story. Great job!
Jenny Jackson, this wasn't what I expected. No swearing or tittie exposure or flipping the bird. Just a great old-fashioned horror tale. Very well told...and scary! Great job and best of luck in the contest.
Not at all what I expected, No Hippo's - The story was very, very well done. My best wishes to you in the contest.
This is very good. I love the build up and the climax. Very well done lass!