by spunkyE
Your behind the times and either should have posted it during the Christmas season or kept it until next year at that time. Just out of sequence with the proper point of the calendar.
Spunky! And of course, I noticed you got the "You should have waited to submit this til next Christmas" comment. lol Don't listen to people that have nothing constructive to say. You did a good job on this. Hope you write more! {{{huggz}}} ~CG
This is a great first story although I do agree it's not the holiday season but that's fine. Can't wait to read more from you.
sweet story there, spunky. does it matter if it ain't christmas now? it doesn't to me *shrug*.
i hope to see more of your stuff up on the submissions soon.
Hey, ignore the poots that read the title that clearly indicates it's a Christmas story, still read it and then leave a pointless comment. Those are the people who only get coal for Christmas! <br><br>
Loved this line! <i>
She looked up in surprise to see a different Santa. He was dressed in a red dressing gown. His beard was shorter and he was remarkably fit. Jamie gasped as she realized Santa was hot.</i> Made me giggle :)
A very enjoyable story. I liked the way you chose to use the Christmas magic to progress things along. Would enjoy reading the next leg of the journey.