All Comments on 'All I Want for Christmas'

by spunkyE

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michchick98michchick98over 15 years ago
All year round....

Makes me wish it was Christmas all year round! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
behind

Your behind the times and either should have posted it during the Christmas season or kept it until next year at that time. Just out of sequence with the proper point of the calendar.

Blueheart0Blueheart0over 15 years ago
I smell cookies

Yummy fun.

chargergirlchargergirlover 15 years ago
Good start!

Spunky! And of course, I noticed you got the "You should have waited to submit this til next Christmas" comment. lol Don't listen to people that have nothing constructive to say. You did a good job on this. Hope you write more! {{{huggz}}} ~CG

PrincessErinPrincessErinover 15 years ago
Great

This is a great first story although I do agree it's not the holiday season but that's fine. Can't wait to read more from you.

geronimo_applebygeronimo_applebyover 15 years ago
Sweet

sweet story there, spunky. does it matter if it ain't christmas now? it doesn't to me *shrug*.

i hope to see more of your stuff up on the submissions soon.

Plainly_JanePlainly_Janeover 15 years ago
Nice first submission!

Hey, ignore the poots that read the title that clearly indicates it's a Christmas story, still read it and then leave a pointless comment. Those are the people who only get coal for Christmas! <br><br>

Loved this line! <i>

She looked up in surprise to see a different Santa. He was dressed in a red dressing gown. His beard was shorter and he was remarkably fit. Jamie gasped as she realized Santa was hot.</i> Made me giggle :)

rjc36_usrjc36_usalmost 3 years ago

A very enjoyable story. I liked the way you chose to use the Christmas magic to progress things along. Would enjoy reading the next leg of the journey.

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