All Comments on 'All I Want for Christmas... Ch. 01'

Keep on writing this. It shows promise and good character development. The setup is decent. Only a few very minor typos, nothing jarring. Nice work overall. Didn't jump right out and grab me yet, though- I don't feel invested in the characters just yet, so hopefully Chapter 2 is where you set the hook.

...writing. The characters are developing slowly but it's a nice beginning and I hope to read more of it.

What's next?!

The story is Nice and slow in movement...I like that. Very promising continuation setting...bring On some more.

Can't wait to read the next chapters... Thank you!

No further chapters ever written: therefore waste of time