All Comments on 'All in the Diction'

by Viviene Valo

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Generally very good...

A lot of intellectual name dropping to establish the scene. Someone who had mastered Joyce, Marx, and Foucalt would be pretty advanced.

The sex scenes were great the interaction, the very kinky proxy sex. That was very unique. Great story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Please continue!

You've got a great start...Now what happens between them?

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