All Comments on 'All In The Family'

by EdCal77

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Great story

Can't wait to read about their next get together. AND will Phil take Carla or Elaine to bed as well. That guy sure can stay busy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Enjoyed the story immensily

This writer manages to blend bisexual activities or wishes with a gay experience. His brother in law will not forget the trip to the hunting cabin.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
A smooth intro to gay sex for the brother-in law

The brother in law obvioulsy wanted to have some gay sex long before this experience and he received a very smooth and easy intro to it in this story.

I hope you keep up with these typres of stories. You are one hell of an author

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
negative

"You are one hell of an author"...NOT !

This is mechanistically-written junk by someone whose words convey no empathy for human beings. The other characters are mere objects, ginned up by the writer's limited frame of reference.

rudilrudilalmost 3 years ago
sexist drivel

Hope nobody wasted their time reading EdCal's story. It objectifies women and just generally lacks empathy. This allegedly being the product of an engineer's mind puts all engineers in a bad light.

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