All Comments on 'All My Fault'

and with such a thriving business ..hey he can afford to pay to get some nice pussy instead of that wore out shit ...he can even find a nice girl to marry now that he has a whore for his customers

The people in these stories have such low opinions of them selves and their loving wives. I know it is fiction, no AIDS,ect, but what about the so called husband, what dose he do for sex, love, companship,actually I really don't give a fuck, story was a turn off.

The husband got what he deserved. He was the type of little crook that makes our society suck. His wife is just a wife who loves to get fucked and the little twerp certainly can't do the job she needs because he is too busy nickling and diming and thinking that he's real smart. What a looser..More of this kind please

its just that i read stories to be in a fantasy world where people have great sex then be happy. the ending is too gloomy for me.

Great story! I loved it and didn't have to stop once to remind myself that it was FICTION. Too damn bad some of the other corespondents here haven't taken the time out from their moralistic preaching to figure that out.

for a worm or less. Not the character, the person who spent all that time and effort to write this self demeaning pitiful less than a male thinking that some would appreciate it.<P>

And amazingly a few did! The wonders of septic taste never fail to surprise.<P>

Lets see, he screwed up, he watched painfully but excitedly, he hated what she did so much that she became his head whore in his business - Really substantial stuff if your into self cuckolding, pimping and watching the mother of your(?) children prefer other cocks to yours.<P>

Sterling old matie & so glad your back. Wouldn't they let you use the computer while you were away?<P>

Surely this isn't the only subject that you write about is it? Gee thats a shame and a waste of talent.

use your mind and think,just another writer who like weak men.if this true give us something different,this story told a 100 times.where story true or false don't just write anything and say read suckers.there some readers who go for anything,so they can feel someone think like they do.

Why won’t you try for a change group sex with a strong intelligent woman as the main character, who on her own initiative has sex with more than one person – not a rug doll bargained as merchandise. Think you can manage that?

just vile... did anyone notice this author is ALSO from the UK?

I really don't understand the anonymous pricks who make such nasty comments. Why do you guys read this stuff if it annoys you? Quin is the master, he knows how to build a story and places you right there, watching the action as the shy wife gets turned into a raging sex machine. Contact me Quin if you would like a sexy pic for a story!!

Hey critics, get a life! This was a fun story to the max. If your wife was "forced" to have sex with a number of men and you could do little about it, wouldn't you want to watch too, just for curiosity's sake? And better your "poor wife" not know of course, hey? I loved it!!!

quin, Your writing gets better all the time. this is one of your better stories. I love the way the wife turns from inocent to slut. perhaps if i make a small suggestion. when she confessed to other men in the past, it might have been appropate to expand on this side making the husband feel even more of a fool

it's that, it's that.. oh I can't put my finger on it. Bottle it and sell it Mr. Quin.

I was hoping that in the end she was a hired prostitute (that was paid very well) that gave them all herpes while the main character and his real wife flew off into the sunset to start their new life. Everyone is happy, except for itchy Mickey.

Ah well.

You can use my ending if you want, I would love to read it again if the ending changed :D

Great story. I would have liked more details of her previous indescretions. This might have been super shocking to Hubby that this wasn't her first time with other men

Liked it!