All Comments on 'All or Nothing'

Very Sexy. You are good.

It would take to long for me to say what I want to about this story. So I won't bother you with that.

But I actually want to read more about how Riley's life changed. I ready dont mind if there was no sex in that chapter,I just really want to see what happened after.

And to see Josh and Maddie get together again, our start a better relationship with each other.

So I think you can say the story really did affect me.

Extremely well written and quite credible

Just left Las Vegas and we had lots of fun and it was easy to picture the scenes you set.

Like to read more like this

What a great story, the porn producer angle was a complete surprise.

What a wonderful story, my wife read it and loved it. Her biggest fantasy is to be watched by hundreds or more and be a porn star so she loved it too!

I liked the initial chapters, but not when the story descended into a standard "fuck and suck" exhibition. Not being a part of the "scene" described in the story, I am not sure that any "normal" girl would agree to this "proposal" I was, however, waiting for Josh to reveal that Maddie was Riley's mother, or that Josh sought out girls who looked like Riley, as they were more commercial.

Being a romantic I was a bit disappointed with the porn part only becat i wanted them to fall in love but great twist loved it

A real turn on, I wasn't sure I'd like the porn star angle but it was good.

I loved it just a tad disapointed josh and riley never fell for each other

Great story, great pacing, impressive inner dialogue...this is a great work. And so damn hot. Nicely done.

punctuation forced too many halts in flow and logic.

This story is a well written story of the road a woman followed from what society calls an ordinary day to day well balanced woman, to whore, to porn star.

This was very very great to read. Even after I got off I had to keep going to see how it all ended. I'm very satisfied.

It was so well written, so much imagination, so hot, it got me so aroused I had to stop halfway, to satisfy my needs.

-shit-oh-dear!...At least.

Someone once said, "there's a little porn star in every woman". Rielly is at the extreme end i think. Very well done, house there's a follow up. Five Stars.

You would benefit from getting an editor. A lot of typos and grammatical errors that made reading your story a bit disjointed. The plot was interesting but a little far out there.

Now that's a crescendo story! Rather incredible I must say.