All Comments on 'All Roads Lead West Ch. 01'

I enjoyed your story and I'm looking forward to reading the rest.

Its a well thought out premise. But it falls short of capturing me for a must read. I think you have great promise to be a great contributor for this site though. But my 2 cents, when you decide to write a story, write it all out or at least write enough that the audience makes an attachment to your charachters.

Nice start. A little short, and a little too fast... Hope you post soon, try to take the story a little slower and try to write 2 or 3 pages.

Looking forward to your next chapter.

N :)

Well this was nice and refreshing....don't mind useless people that have nothing better to write than "YAWN" ... nice start and hope to see more of this soon. Regards

Just love a historical romance

doing great then the last two paragraphs got a bit rushed thru. Cant wait to see the rest- please post soon! ;-)

Ride her good! The story obviously.

Are you planning to continue? You've got me hooked...

Are you going to continue with this story? I would like to know so I can keep waiting or move forward and stop checking for and update.thank you

This is just my kind if fantasy, and I would love to see where it goes. I know it's been forever, but you just updated your other story a few months ago.

What a great opening chapter! A real shame it will never be finished...

Is there going to be a second chapter?

Hi there! It was an interesting opening chapter. I noticed you have been on Lit in Feb 2021. I just wanted to know if you are ever going to finish it. A yes or no update on this matter would definitely please the readers. Thank you!

Regards,

I.W

Holding out hope you will finish this story……