All Comments on 'All So Innocent Ch. 01'

I liked it and the ending was fantastic...however I feel the beginning of the story let it down...It sounded all too vaguely familiar with the husband part...Maybe that's just me.....

I would like to see where the stories heading though...

i dont mind long stories but just couldnt get into this one nothing sensual about your writing at all

Yes please can i have more man i was so into that story and it had to end there! Damm I want more and sooo!

Take this all the way, it is a good start to what could be a great story if you don;t rush it.

What are the others talking about "End of story" This is headed Chapter 01 which I ghope means there are more to follow.

That was a nice chapter that you wrote about Carla and Mike boss. I hope you write another chapter because you left this one too soon specially with Mike holding her panties in his hand and her leaving the office. What will she do next to him.

Great start. I know this woman; grin

You really get inside 'her' head here; wow, I was disappointed she didn't take him in the office right then. More

Sexy. Nice characters.

Sexy and subtle: therein lay its power. This might be one of the most well-written stories on Literotica.