All Comments on 'All Souls' Day'

Excellent job on this version. It has all the extra little bits that make your stories wonderful. I hope you win the contest.^_^

just wow!

fan-fucking-tastic...

I loved this story. I guess love really does find a way. I hope you win. GOOD LUCK!!! :)

You're writting has improved in leaps and bounds! This was just great, well worthy of winning the contest. Congratulations =)

I Loved it....Beautiful....A definite winner!!!!

Your story was beautiful, sexy, perfectly written and made me cry. You f-ing rock!

Wow.Just.wow. Amazing sexy, powerful, and moving. I'm not gay, but I loved it.

You rock!!! 666

So I'm a woman, and I'm straight, but this was an absolutely fantastic and beautiful Halloween story - I LOVED it!! The best I've read so far! Good luck.

This was well written and fun. Your main character seems like a real person, and that's rare in erotic fiction. Very good job. Loved how he picked apart the party's decorations, btw... that was so funny! Good luck in the contest!

moving... arousing...haunting. Loved it! Great job!!!

AZ's description is hott, sexy and charming. His wings, wow his wings sound so amazing. Loved your descriptions and the way the characters interacted with one another. Great story.

Perfect.....

Need I say anything more ... ... ...

That was excellent I really enjoyed it

I've never commented on a story before, but I wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed this story. You write very well and both the characters and premise are sound and interesting. I'd love to see what you would do with something longer - please keep writing!

...just re-read for the second time and it was just as good.

definitely a favourite ;0)

I've ignored this story for so long and I don't know what came over me today but I read it and boy.....it's amazing! Thank you..you truly have a gift for writing!

This story is good but please can you continue the Harvest stories..I check every week to see if there are any further stories.

I really enjoyed this story.

It was very well done and very sweet.

I also agree with the responce below.

Can you please finish more chapters from "The Harvest".

I love that series.

It's a great story and very well written! I felt it was realistic despite the fantasy in it. Thanks for a great read!

I would love to see more. maybe prt two ?

You have one of the most wonderful imaginations I've ever read.

This was a really good story. The idea is original and the way it was put together was nice. I liked the idea of Az searching for the same soul over and over; it's sweet in a sad, romantic way. Makes you feel for the guy. Also really liked Grey. I've met too many doctors who just don't really care like Grey does, so meeting one with compassion endears him to you. I think with some spacing, maybe making this chapter longer, that this would make another good multi-chapter story.

On another note: I really am a big fan. I've read everything you've posted so far. A Ta'Narian (sp?) Christmas was the first. I liked that even though I hadn't read the Harvest series, it was still easy to follow and enjoyable. When I went back and read the Harvest series, I fell in love with it. In all seriousness, with just a bit of flushing out, it would make a great book, and if I were you, I'd think about publishing. :) Loved the Cupid story too. After that, I just HAD to read Mo's story as well. (waiting on chapter three, -cough, cough- lol). You're really good and I have your page bookmarked so I can return and look for more. I can't wait!

-Raven Vice

back again!

we never did find out if az had any hidden piercing !!! lol

thanks for all your tales ;0)

I am never disappointed by your stories!! Love this one, even if it is short... :-)

I am a loyal fan...

All of your stories are positively intoxicating, this one especially. The imagination you have is something not to waste--keep it up!

As I have come to expect from your stories. How sweet that Az spent his whole 'life' trying to find Grey in all his reappearances. You do this so well.

Wonderful as always with your work. Please, please let me know when you publish so I can buy it. I really miss your Harvest stories, I used to read them over and over because they made me smile and laugh. This story is so sweet and comforting. I love it. Merry Christmas.

What a wonderful story. Thank you again for sharing.

This is really good. I felt heartbroken when he said that he's been in love with him for so long,and that every time he was rejected and had to witness his love dying; over and over again,for the entire span of his immortal life. That really says something about acceptance and love you know.

SERIES PLEEEEEEEEEEEASE !!!!!!!!! MORE ! MORE ! MORE ! PLEASE !!!! THIS IS TOO GOOD NOT TO MAKE IT A SERIES AND IN MORE ANGELS AND THEIR MATES. MAYBE THROW IN AN ANGEL FOR VAMPIRES THAT HAVE SOULS. AN ANGEL FOR WEREWOLVES AND OTHER SUPERNATURAL BEINGS. AN ANGEL MERMAN ? ETC. WHOO BOY ! THIS HAS SO MUCH POTENTIAL FOR A LONG RUNNING SERIES WITH SPIN-OFFS. AND MAYBE, MAYBE FOR GUEST WRITERS TO WRITE WITH YOU ??????? PLEASE !!!

Yes, I agree this could become an awesome series ! OMG this Az was simply too hot for words - and I'm so glad he and Grey found each other at last.

A very caring story, I totally loved it.

Please keep on writing your amazing stories, I just can't get enough ! :))

I've read it several times, and it's still so captivating. The misunderstandings, the true abiding love uncovered... It's just perfect. I especially appreciate how they go from appearing to work opposite sides, to working together as a team - the doctor saving those whose time has not come, and his angel escorting the souls of those ready to move on.

sorry, I couldn't wait :-) I saw the first chapter on your blog and had to come and read the whole thing again! love it as much as I did the first three times :-)

@secretsides - That made my day. :)

~M

That was incredible!! Omg! I loved it!!! I have read so many stories, but you knocked my socks off with this one!!! Great job!!! I never saw it coming. Sooooo good. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. 😁😁😁