All Comments on 'All Summer Long Ch. 01'

It was okay so far, and I'll be looking for the rest of the story.

You're off to a good start and I can't wait to read more

This is going into my list of top 10 favorites for the last 6 years .

Slightly quicker start than it needed to be, but the tease of things to cum makes up for that.

I want to see how this develops... Betting on some "parental instruction".

This is great, a unique start for a brother and sister sexual seduction and suggestive of more fun to come. I'd like to see the storyline stay between the brother and sister, so I'm disagreeing with one reviewer's comment.

but don't leave us hanging :) Give us the rest of the summer - that's a great story

Thanx!

Thanks, guys. Appreciate the quick feedback.

FYI, Chapter 2 is up tomorrow but it could be a while after that. I have a 7 chapter story mapped out, most between the brother and sister but there will be one or more mystery guest(s).

Chapter 3 is in progress now, hoping to have it wrapped this week but we'll see. Real-life is a time suck from writing sometimes :)

That was a nice start to a series about her brother and sister. It was short and sweet and to the point. I can hardly wait for the next chapter

Excellent - good start to hopefully a long series

good so far but do us a favor and keep it to just the two of them no parents or mystery guests incest is best when kept between two people more people ruin the feel of it

That would have made my day.. Thanks for posting..

The teasing is way hotter than just jumping in the sack, more please.