All Comments on 'All That We Had'

by Pioden

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Scotsman69Scotsman69about 12 years ago
Absolutely beautiful writing.

Lit has a new literate star. Keep writing, Pioden.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Breathtaking...

but short, but any longer may have ruined the fragility and the tension. 5 stars, please write more.

SimonBrookeSimonBrookeabout 12 years ago
Ouch! That one has a sting in the tail

Well written, great evocation of mood. But, ouch. I'm not sure whether I love it or I hate it, but I know that it is very good.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
5 Stars Perfection.

Again, not my normal read, but you write so well and conjure such imagery I couldn't stop reading!! excellent.

BestOfAllWorldsBestOfAllWorldsover 6 years ago
Wow

Very powerful short story.

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