by Pioden
Lit has a new literate star. Keep writing, Pioden.
but short, but any longer may have ruined the fragility and the tension. 5 stars, please write more.
Well written, great evocation of mood. But, ouch. I'm not sure whether I love it or I hate it, but I know that it is very good.
Again, not my normal read, but you write so well and conjure such imagery I couldn't stop reading!! excellent.