All Comments on 'All the While My Son Was Watching'

The only way to improve this story would be to have a MILF pic in Swhisperer's profile! A story well done, at least according to the 'woody' scale.

Things went a little fast and no thought was given to any actions. As such, not really what you could call a realistic story. Nevertheless, in my opinion there's room for stroke stories that don't spend pages upon pages of setting up the part that it's about. As short stroke stories go, this was pretty hot.

Knowing how kids can be in a group I found the story to be believeable . Not bad at all .

Way too short. Couldn't even get a nut it was so short. ;-)

was damn good and hot. Now she sohould have her son and one or two of the boys over for lunch every day! As another MILF she could train them like I have done!!!

as a mom,, I love this fantasy,,,lovely story

This fine story shows how young male camaraderie can spread the fun of motherfucking. Glenn's mother is hot for young dick, especially the cocks of her son's buddies. As 18-year-olds the boys are naturally drawn to any cunt on offer, and one after the other they fuck Glenn's mother right in front of his deeply interested eyes. When the five friends are through unloading their teenage balls up the mother's cunt, they urge Glenn to mount his mother. Her son doesn't hesitate a second, he drops his pants and shoves his big stiff prick up between his mother's legs. As his buddies laugh and cheer on their motherfucking friend, Glenn gives his mom the best fuck she's ever! When he growls and finally empties his heavy balls up his own mother's twat his pals slap him on the back and congratulate him. It's what they'd all love to do to their own moms--and maybe now they will! Glenn knows that his mother's loving cunt'll be his from now on.

take it when it is offered. MILF or MOM take it and hold on tight for the ride of your life. THX

Damn! Now that he watched all of his buddies fuck his mom, I hope he kicks them out and takes his mom to her bed and makes love to her. He should show her that he can take care of all her sexual needs and that he can be the man she has been wanting to fulfill her life. PLEASE, keep on writing about this mom and her need for her son, it would make such a hot series. They could fall in love and live a good productive life as husband and wife.Thanks for the very erotic story......Rich

Not a bad first time effort but it felt way too rushed. Why not build up the action? It felt like wham bam and it's over. I agree with an earlier commenter; I hardly got my pants down and it was over, lol. Thank you for the effort. 6/10

A very nice first effort, with a few minor glitches. You changed tense a few times and there should have been spaces when different characters were speaking. I tend to follow the rule of never starting a sentence with "And" as well. I do agree the story could have been longer, but my early efforts were a lot shorter than my current ones, it all takes time. If you need any help or advice, please don't hesitate to ask. Keep up the good work and have fun writing!

I enjoyed it incredibly and only wish I could have been on of the "boys"

I've often had very similar fantisies. Alas, I've thought it best for my situation to exclude my sons from the fun and the knowledge of the fun. Their friends have had the full pleasure. :) Jenny

It's a pity though that we don't have more contributions from this highly talented writer. I'd like to say something about the comment from Jenny, who has fantasies about getting fucked by her own sons but rejects the idea. Ma'am, I admire your honesty and respect you as a lady and a mother. But I sincerely urge you to reconsider, both for your sake and the sake of your boys. It's perfectly natural for a mother to be attracted to what her boy's got swinging between his legs. His young prick is as stiff as any around and a lot stiffer than most, and his young balls just keep on churning out that rich potent cream that moms love in their virile manly son. Ma'am, there's no reason whatever why you should deny yourself the delight of having your motherly cunt filled to bursting with your boys' fine fat pricks. Believe me, your boys would LOVE to give you their precious gift of the foaming sperm they're carrying around in their lusty young balls. For them their mommy's warm welcoming twat is the ideal place to snuggle their stiff young dicks up into, and that wonderful hole between your legs---their own damn birth canal! oh fuck!---is exactly what they want to unload their young balls up into and flood with their endless doses of baby batter. Ma'am, I truly hope you'll do yourself and your sons the greatest favor of your lives. You can't imagine how much FUN you and your boys are going to have!

you are a evil sick person who never should have children you are a moron who should have never been born in the first place you and your family where are sick and twisted in the head and need to be put do hope your sick son and his scum friend never have children god help them they will be abused like what you done to your own child

Sick is the person who comes to an adult story site to read incest stories, and then complains about it.

To the author. Keep writing no matter what anyone says!

A MILF getting gangbanged by all of her sons horny mates right in front of his eyes, and then after her pussys been well fucked by five fat cocks, the slut is fucked roughly by her own offspring! Oh fuck! Maybe they can make this a regular thing and maybe include some of the other lads parents. I bet after cheering their best buddy shoving his cock into his own birth canal and cumming all over his own mother, they are craving the same from their own mothers!

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When mother let's her son and friends fuck her and let's them cum in her.hope she got pregnant too.we gangbanged mom and other friends mom's and they end up pregnant with at least one of us that got them pregnant

Like the story even the other when the mom other moms got fucked and got pregnant.when my brothers and me showed story to are mom she read it and said there is noway that I am doing that.so us 4 had her in middle of us picked her up brought her living room put her on floor ripped her clothes off she screamed don't.nice she was naked we looked her over saw her tits were huge with extra large dark brown nippples and cunt hair real thick stood out about 3in.she tried to get up but we held her down spread her legs and three of us did triple cock in her cunt and one in her ass and she screamed when we fucked her real rough.we made sure we pumped our cum in her and she did end up getting pregnant.but just once but four times.after that she had her tubes tied show she couldn't get pregnant.we take her to house parties and gangbang her with friends and once we are finished we look see covered sperm hickys we know she got fucked real good plus ends up being sore for days.there are days house smells of sex and we won't let her shower.because we fuck her till her cunt is raw and sore and she even walks bow legged too from us fucking her.we made her are sperm bank too.she is now in her sixties and she still let's us fuck her.for us 4 not married we have a woman that makes us happy and we make her also happy

good story! i'd love to watch other young guys fuck my mom hard and then fuck her myself and cover her in cum. she was a high school teacher a few years back at my school and everyone was talking about how they'd love to fuck her so i hope some of her students got to

When mom let's young guys fuck her then her son. Hope she got pregnant by one of them. There was one friends mom that came home drunk her name was Kay she weighed 165lbs stood 5'4in she had dd 40 in chest. We looked at her said let's have some fun gangbanging her.there was 8 of us so we got up walked towards her grabbed her brought her into living room then we grabbed her dress ripped it off.then off comes bra and her panties.said what are you doing we said plan on fucking you and said no let me go.told guys hold her down grab hers spread wide that's when I got on top rammed my cock in her cunt.she screamed I bottomed out in her just kept fucking her hard.got her to cum then I said her comes my load and she don't not protected I said to late cum inside her.then everyone else did too.we just kept on going fucking her did double penetration cunt and ass then double vag triple vag plus one in her ass.she came least 10 times plus gangbanged till day light.she end up covered in cum bite marks and hickeys.her cunt hair was matted right to her skin.told Kay looks like you been fucked good and hard.then I told her hope your pregnant with my kid.then three weeks later she was pregnant told me are you happy said yep even told will be over each day fuck you put more cum in that hairy cunt of yours too

I wish she was my mother and I fucked her witen of my friends not five. We will give her full satisfaction.

Disgusting.

This story in an excellent incest/taboo fantasy.

It was a shock to me when i first realized my mom was craving sex & was interested in men other than my dad. My parents had a wide circle of friends & they entertained a lot. My uncle's cottage was at their disposal most summer-time weekends. Their cottage parties were well attended. The cottage was on a huge property. It was before LED lights & the only sources of lights were the firepit & the moon.

If my mom fancied a man, she was openly hitting on him. In general she knew how to get men's attention.

My mom was a shapely woman. On her 5 foot 9 frame the extra pounds looked very sexy. Plus they were on all the right places!

Her body was naturally very firm.

Men who liked a big bigger women were mesmerized by my mom's body. & so was I.

Based on things i saw, i was sure she was cheating on my dad.

Seeing my mom touched & caressed in the dark by a man other than my dad was making me confused: i felt ashamed of her, but also whatever i saw was turning me on big time. Luckily my hard on was not obvious in the dark.

I was never mad at my mom. I loved her as a son should love his mother, but i was totally infatuated with her, her slutty behavior & her Rubenesque body!

My mom was in 80% of my erotic fantasies.

Moreover, my first wife was a spitting image of my mom!

What i exhibited at the time must have been a full-blown Oedipus complex.

As you can see, some mothers are wild & adventurous, their libido is turbo charged, & they like to stray. With my luck, my mom was one of them.

:-)

A whore story? 1 star

5- [4.6 = 92% (☆☆☆☆☆-)]

This is en excellent incest/taboo story

I was a voyeur son. Essentially I had the hots for my mom. My mom was in most of my erotic fantasies, including the jack-off ones.

My mom was very outgoing. My parents had a wide circle of friends. They also had a small group of intimate friend (as a rule, couples).

I was young and there were things I could not understand. My mom best girlfriend from work and her husband Stanley frequently paid us a visit. It was often just my mom and dad and my mom bestie and Stanly.

WHAT I HATED & LOVED (2-in-1!) was the fact Stanley was non-stop touching my mom. In the summer, Stanley would "massage" my mom's thighs. He massaged the back of her thighs from the back of her knees all the way up to the rim of her Daisy Dukes where the bottoms of her ass cheeks were exposed!

My dad and Stanley's wife were present.