by dweaver999
...the exploration of Cynthia's personalities at the end almost as much as the sex scenes (which were brilliant).
I've read a bit in this site, and your story is very good.
You mix well the sexy and add up secondary roles quite well.
I'm not a writer myself, might try it sometime, but so far, i like your story.
Thank you for sharing it on this site.
I don't get off on the thought of non concentual physical abuse but even with those parts in this story, I have to say this is an example of incredible writing. Very original and the plot development is fluid as well as imaginative.