All Comments on 'All Tied Up'

The biggest one and the one that killed the story for me is that the security at the Air Force Academy is very tight. She never would have been there so this sorry little tale of seduction never would have happened and two, if she somehow had made it to his room, she NEVER would have risked his career doing what she did and then never would have considered leaving him. Code of Conduct would have gotten him bounced. How happy would he have been with the little bitch then? Implausible tale.

Maybe on an ordinary college campus, but in one of the Service Academy's? Not a snowballs chance in hell. And after a small amount of time, even in the dark, he would have been able to see who it was. Too unbelievable, even for fiction.

I’ve said it before and I’ll say it again. I love, love, love being tied into a helpless position and the fact that she “fed” him her pussy was even more exciting.

Exciting read.

Ticklishsoles