by HunterShambles
Loved it. Please don't have Chris and Julie get involved with the other couple, it will ruin your story. Maybe have the temptation there but Chris and Julie both verbally out loud say no I only want you Chris and you Julie.
As I indicated before, the two couples won't always find it convenient to double date, and they are going to find they like their alternates, at least, and temptations will arise. How will they handle that?
You keep getting the names all mixed up, it makes it really difficult to follow the plot.
Get it sorted !