All Comments on 'Allan is Surprised'

Sounds like a fun job to have.

Nice story but needs more development in the details,

Then would be having everybody reading one handed!!

Loved this story and will be reading your other previous stories next too.

A neat fantasy.

The short story had some appeal.

More info on the products hubby modeled would have improved the story.

What did the ladies do while hubby was being pegged?

Fun story.

An interesting story but way too short. Needs development. Longer descriptive passages detailing how the women "used" Allan! I will try the other offerings as I like getting a ladies point of view!

This was a very enjoyable story, just to rushed. I would have liked it to be slowed down and drug out over at least 2 pages with a little more emotion. Still a fun read!