All Comments on 'Alley Slut Ch. 01'

not sexy at all.

Good start keep going

This begs for more chapters as Malcolm surely will want to pop her anal cherry and also get a BJ from the innocent Kelly.

It's not very well written. It comes across as creepy and him somehow recording her saying that is cheap and stupid.

You describe him as a creepy old man yet also in his low 30’s

Make your mind up

Your description of Malcom was really hot. It added to the scene of him banging Kelly to recall that.

It was pretty hot.

Good job.

Loved it, love this scene, could be a bit more descriptive over the position she getting fucked, would have moved from the dumpsters to a bit cleaner but not real clean area but overall really liked it.

creepy, very rapey.