All Comments on 'Allie Grows Up Ch. 03'

Good story, hope to see more soon!

Keep writing. This is a great series

Just another stupid story with him calling her "babygirl" and himself "daddy".

"Babygirl, do you know what would make Daddy very happy? "

"Do you like the way Daddy's treat tastes?"

Total and utter shite.

Wonderful! Keep up the good work!

hope to see more from you in this series

Almost perfect except for the... Well the same thing is beaing said so if u can get some variation in the words that would be spectacular

please can you write ch 04 quickly!

I thought this chapter was too short and repetitive.

Pretty short, and calling her a slut totally ruined it for me. Either shes his good little girl or his bad little girl. If he wants a slut he can start banging the girl next door that puts out for the football team before games, then he'll be getting what he's calling her.

I am loving it! Want to hear about Allie losing her virginity, etc., etc....Great writing!

For the love of Pete, where is chapter 4??? But more importantly the chapter where he takes her virginity?!?! You can't leave a reader hanging like this. It's torture. Lol

I love this story but I really don't like how he calls her a slut because she is an innocent little girl, not a whore you can buy for twenty bucks. plus, she is a good girl, if she was being a bad girl then it would make sense for him to call her a slut...

but I really love this story and PLEASE make your chapters longer because I need more, faster haaha

Had me right up to the point where he thought; “just the kind of girl every boy got a turn with.God that turned me on...”. That’s the kind of father who gives incest a foul connotation. Grow up