All Comments on 'Allison Ch. 02'

Very hot but way too short. It's spelled "tongue" by the way, not "tounge".

Thanks for catching that. Fixed all of those typos I think.

There's an edited filing pending and it's much longer. Not sure what happened with the file on the first submission. Hopefully you will see the rest of the story in 48 hours or less.

Looking forward to the next chapter

Toms next lesson from Allison! Will you be continuing this story?

.....Dude, get an editor! The choppy sentences, the misspellings, the poor use of the English language.....so annoying to this reader. But I’m still enjoying the content.

Great story. Made me so hard.