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The night I wrote this I had read a story that was very poorly written. One commentator stated "What did you do? Stay up all night and write this?" I agreed and laughed out loud.

Then that's exactly what I did!

I couldn't sleep myself and so I stayed up and wrote, edited, (very poorly as it turns out!) and submitted 'Allyssa'

More fool me for laughing lol

I will re-edit soon.

Cheers,

Nymfoholic

It's a student and her teacher. While such relationships are typically frowned upon, they're not "taboo", strictly speaking. This story should have been posted in one of the other genres on this site.

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Love love love this so good even better for me since my name is Allyssa to same spelling and all

Love this the writing was great..please make a part 2 for this