All Comments on 'Almost a Love Story'

Another waste of time [similar to Amyyum's piteous garbage].

Heck - I'd settle for decent writing. This was run on and on and never get to the point drivel. Lacking compelling writing and any decent reasons for their behavior, this was neither interesting or entertaining. BAH!

And other problems with this story. Not physically possible to have sex in the spooning position and 'banging his balls against her ass'; that would mean his balls are on top not below his cock???

Basic anatomy is one thing a decent erotica writer should know.

one hopes you continue this story to try and save it. One hopes the Alec finds out what a cheating, back stabbing, no fucking good cheating whore his wife is.

Alec should divorce the skank giving the slut as little as possible. Then find Kyle and kick him in the ball so hard it will be months if ever he can have sex with whore Doreen. If they do have sex, hopefully Kyle will knock the bitch up and give her AIDS at the same time so that they both along with their bastard baby die slow miserable painful deaths

The tale of a brainless kid. 'I was married at 15 and was now 22, ..was this the 7 year itch I was experiencing?..' And had 2 kids of school age! And a loving husband who has no clue? And she was 22 for the whole 2 years. With all the fucking no wonder time flew by.

Another "poor me" story. Again, I'll ask the same question, what would she feel like if the roles were reversed and he had been bedding one of her friends for two years. Double standards I would presume...bet the author doesn't even want to ponder such an idea.

That the author here is blatant cuck with no balls. A women pretending to be a man. Story sucks.

She's a skank, an egotist, a cheater and liar. She should rot in hell.

another whore and her minion

he and the whore have been moved into a home he does not own, they are renting from his family

when he dumps the whore she will have no home and no job and no way to support his kids

Age old story: man works his ass off to support his family, and the wife gets 'bored because he's never here'! She got married at 15, so it's not like if he leaves her she will become president of the Bank of England or anything. She is so shallow as to be all surface.