All Comments on 'Almost Chance Ch. 14'

i hav read these chapters over and over again, and to think it all took place over 24hours is amazing!!! What a lovely, captivating story through and through. Whilst reading all of it, there hav been many times where i hav brought my eyes down submissively. The emotion u hav drawn out of me while reading all the chapters makes me believe that i could be Jen!! My stomach churned as i read the dreaded words 'THE END'.. i feel a little empty that this is the end, or will u surprise me, and make Kelly part of a continuing story!!! Excellent writing noebode, and thanku very much xxx

We are glad this is fiction because how can Jen not be mad at Kate and Kelly. Kate said she did not know who her friend was when they met on the train, yet she did. Will Kate pubicily humiliate Jen in the future? Kelly set Jet up for Kate. Maybe Kelly was arraid to face Jen since she was haveing another affair, who knows. Jen has been betrayed by her mistress and her friend, so she should dress and leave. We were very sad to read that she is putting herself into servitude.

Laura & Lisa, bi sisters @ CU

You have truly captivated the submissive soul in this piece. So revealing, even in the unstated. Very well done. Please keep writing.

This story was perfect. my Mistress suggested it to me and i am so glad that She did. i read it from beginning to end in two hours. From the very first sentence to the last word, i felt like i was Jen. i experienced everything right along with her. Her journey into submission actually *felt* real. Thank you for writing this story...and thank you even more for sharing it.

and a damn good job. Fiction, true, but you have done a good job filling out the characters. Thanks!!

This is the most beautiful and extremely erotic story I have ever read and I just wanted to say thank you for sharing it!

I must say this story touched me in many ways. The detail was perfect. Wonderful.

BDSM scares me. So why was I so highly turned on by this? 5 stars for the whole series.

i love the story pls write some more chapters

wonderful series. It captures both the physical actions that define BDSM and the trust and intimacy that can span all genres. Just as any pair (in any genre) can go through the motions, only certain pairs will attain the height these two did.

I confess that early on I was wishing chapters to be longer, but when Jen was following candles to Mistress I felt a gentle parallel. One chapter leading to the next. One lesson leading Jen to deeper awareness of both the lifestyle and herself.

Thanks for sharing this powerful series.

I love you ok. I want to make love to you. That was the best story I have ever read and I would read it again and again. You could be a 400 year old slug and if you wrote this I would marry you ok. BEST THING EVER

Okay, this was some really good erotic writing. A few typos here and there but nothing that kept me from reading every single chapter. I wish you'd write some more chapters! I want to know more about Jen's complete submission to Mistress. Please write more chapters! I'll get on my hands and knees if you want... ;-)

I always come back to this one story

I have read this story more than 6 times and it never gets tiring. The most passionate erotic story I've ever read. This story is my fantasy.

I always searched for BDSM stories where there is really love & a deep devotion involved and seldomly found it. Your story is heaven! Not only that I find those things in here, but also so much skill in describing the little nuances of the sensual experiences. This makes it a real gem between all the stories on here.

Thank you so much!

I would so love for you to write more, but this story is already years ago and it seems you stopped writing or at least publishing on here.

If you read this kudos to you!