All Comments on 'Almost Joining The Mile-High Club'
by montrechic
- 6 Comments
Anonymousabout 17 years agoFor the first timer, I think you have written a great story. It was definitely erotic, although I would have loved to see more action (more than just the oral). Maybe something you can write in your second story. All in all, great job!
bornagainabout 17 years agoThe story was put together and you had maybe one mispelled word in it i think you should continue with the story.
Atlanta,Ga
Anonymousabout 17 years agoKeep up the good work. I look forward to more of your submisissions.
sirhugsabout 17 years agoI gave this a mixed review, on the New Story Reviews on the Author's Hangout of the Lit Forums, but like another comment, I thought for a first writer, it showed promise. I look forward to the next effort.
Anonymousabout 17 years agodude-- if 7 inches to you is a monster you must be hung like a thimbel!!! hey dude i have 9 1/2 inches ---now thats ALMOST a monster!!!
Anonymousabout 13 years agoClose enough to join the MHC. I've done this on a flight with a friendly gal too. We never left the seat though; just hid under a blanket. Great story!
