All Comments on 'Alone At Home With My Cousin Ch. 01'

This was not at all bad, especially for a first effort. I'm pleased you decided to submit this for publication - that's the first hurdle over! Welcome to Lit and I hope you will enjoy it here - and bring us lots more stories as well thought-through as this one. Four stars and my thanks for a good start.

You really need an editor. Although the story has potential it was very difficult to read as if written by an 8th grader

You have good potential. A lot of good ideas but story is a little rushed and too many things. Concentrate on the more realistic elements. Write about looking,feelings having to jo with stockings etc.

As a very old foot lover, I'm distressed that the kid is so wussy! I love to suck and fuck toes and feet but would never let a woman treat me as she does him. Foot sex is great, but there is no need for a guy to be submissive to the object of his lust to enjoy it. Gave it only a 3 because of the guy's willingness to be dominated. Different strokes for different folks, but that's not how it works for me.

please add more chapters to this story

Has some typo's but great story.

I loved this story

i wish i could be you....becoming a slave and lcik her feet

I couldn't get past the second paragraph because of how many grammatical errors there were, I'm sorry. I bet this is a great story just, next time, use some form of spellchecker thatll help with grammatically incorrect sentences.

i came

more please

What a stupid story.

There is something beautiful and powerful about being owned by your cousin You are very lucky 4yourpleasureiam

Yes please continue on. With fetishes in a story also comes tickling, but not always.

Thanks for sharing.