All Comments on 'Alone at Last'

But the writing could do with a little polishing, some of the dialogue is stilted and there are a few spelling issues. But other than that I love your imagination, please keep writing :)

Do not stop. Do not pass GO. Straight to a lawyer. Recording you illegally like that and then suggesting a four some? Time to get your ducks in a row, plan for the future alone and get a lot of money for that future.