All Comments on 'Alone At The Beach... Ch. 02'

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anne27anne27over 19 years ago
Erotic and well written!

Very erotic and pasionately written. Loved it and can't wait for another installment!

TennesseeMeTennesseeMeover 19 years ago
hardon material

I want to know where your secret beach is. But I know its not near Tennessee so I might as well not even ask.

cchheelscchheelsover 19 years ago
Loved it

Very hot 69. Kept me hard all through the story. Am eagerly awaiting the following chapter, as many others are as well. Hope your weekend goes well. I'm sure it will.

GoddessOfSoulsGoddessOfSoulsover 19 years ago
Well done!

Very well written as always your gift for story telling excels when written using your own ideals and desires. Good luck to you, I'm sure chapter 3 will be even hotter!

whsprwhsprover 19 years ago
HOT...HOT....HOT

That story is very hot!! I give it the 5 damp panties award.

Can't wait for Chapter 3....mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

Lloyd2004Lloyd2004over 19 years ago
FUCK THIS IS HOT!

Well written with a good ending, guess we gotta wait a bit for the next installment

Luck7ladyLuck7ladyover 19 years ago
Extreamly hot!

69 just awesome hun, looking forward to CH.3

liferguyliferguyover 19 years ago
EROTIC

You pen well... Keep them cumming....

kalalaukalalauover 19 years ago
Amazing Beach Story

I read the first chapter before I started surfing the Lit boards, so it's doubly nice to read your story now, being a little more familiar with you.

What a hot story! I grew up on the beach and am an exhibitionist as well, so the story stroked my imagination.

I had my hand in my pants during the entire read and did a lot of stroking in that area, too!!

How about a third chapter soon....

Thanks a lot.

Arianna LeeArianna Leeover 19 years ago
Now I am really at a loss for words........

Well.....I thought the first story had my panties a little moist. I read part 2 and I think I need to go change them....I hope this isn't all we will here from you. You write incredibly. You have a way of really expressing things....I can only hope that I will be able to reach this level of writing. I look forward to reading more from you.........

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
stiff

great story. one of the best cums i have had. my cock is still hard after cumming. next story please....

FyreKatFyreKatalmost 19 years ago
i like the way you think!

loved the first two chapters...can't wait until the other guy joins in...

shmilyshmilyalmost 19 years ago
soaking wet

Yummy, can't wait for ch. 3

I agree with the others wet panties here...

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rozezwildrozezwildover 18 years ago
WOW

Hawt Hawt Hawt damn sexy i wanna come and play

lancewannabelancewannabeover 18 years ago
DAMNED HOT!

That was, by far one of the most intense stories I've read on Lit. VERY nice.

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