by LaPatitMort
Interesting characters, certainly not run of the mill. Nicely drawn love scene, a classy alternative to in-and-out-and-come buckets.
Hope to hear more about this couple in the future - would like to see the attraction develop to romance, perhaps even commitment....
A very good read, nicely developed story, and as mentioned earlier, not the usual wam,bam, f*** you. Please consider developing this into a longer story. Thank you for a very nice start to a busy day.
This is a story that should have more chapters. I love these characters...I want to see where it goes from here.
This seems to be fantasy of all us old folks until we reach the late sixties...
It was a pretty good story, well told and relate-able. But somehow the ending felt cut off, like there are a couple paragraphs missing.
A couple of years investment, and now your butterfly has cum out of her cunnycoon. I luv the new identity and a trip to testout the new look. Xplain me how it is no visitors to the farm.?
Hell it dosent matter cheers, I think your going to the well at least once more tonight.
Your storylines are so refreshing. Thanks for sharing.