by Danielle_Sanchez
REALLY hope there’s another chapter(s) to continue her descent!
The story was well written, kept me engaged... and most of all, kept me hard. More please!
The groundwork has been well-laid! NO bra on the train anymore, has blown one 'gentleman' so I'm sure will blow the other AND has had her skirt raised, panties removed and her bare butt spanked....so what's next.... naked on the train? choosing which slut-hole each man will be offered and in what order..... ending in hubby being offered (unknowingly) a cream pie or two??? SO many possibilities!! Bravo!!
Very well written, with excellent pace and build up of tension. Very arousing!
It`s a breath of fresh air to have a woman writing a story of humiliation and being aroused by it. Too many women feel the need to be anonymous when pushing out the boundaries. Hopefully other women enjoy this taste in writing and openly say they enjoyed it. I hope to write some stories for women with a bit of romance in but also get the right balance of sex without turning women off.
I`ll read your other stories soon. Keep up the good work.
Hiya, love your story, great stile to keep people tight to continue reading.
Plus it gave me a hardon.
Well done Danielle ! Couldn’t stop reading this erotic and suspenseful story.
There was a lot of originality to your story. I enjoyed it from start to finish. Nicely done! Five stars from me. -- JB Edwards
Thank you Danielle. Your story revived some memories of my subway trips from Drexel to home a few years ago. Keep up the good work.
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