All Comments on 'Alone on the Island'

The content was perfect and the way it was written was magnificient!!!!

That was beautiful - but how did they end up on a desert island?????

Writing in the third person present tense is an irritating and pretentious waste of time and space here; people want to have a story narrated, not laid out like stage directions. 2 stars, because it dropped my interest after the first paragraph, and reading through to the end didn't improve it.

all of these stories!! Gave it a 5 for your effort. And ANNONY eat it fuck bubble!

good story - worthy of the 5