All Comments on 'Along Came Nikka'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Erotic in a feel-good sort of way. Quite believable too. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Wurst of the quest?

This wouldn't be where the wurst are the wurst would it? If so I wanna know where this spot is. I hate dealing with the kids. Great story. Finished before I finished.

LupusDeiLupusDeialmost 7 years ago
Nice

There only one criticism from me. Painfully short sentences. A few too many of them. Works a bit awkward with first person present. But still works, mostly. Maybe that's just style. In character of the protagonist. Other than that, very enjoyable story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
July 14 is cumming

I would love to see this continue in July.

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