by zoolicious
This wouldn't be where the wurst are the wurst would it? If so I wanna know where this spot is. I hate dealing with the kids. Great story. Finished before I finished.
There only one criticism from me. Painfully short sentences. A few too many of them. Works a bit awkward with first person present. But still works, mostly. Maybe that's just style. In character of the protagonist. Other than that, very enjoyable story.