All Comments on 'Alpha Ch. 08'

That was long enough to make up for time:) very good! Thank you :)

Glad to wait but excited to read MORE!!!!!!!

wow , what an amazing gify you have.. you certsinly gave us it all.no short story, disappointinly short.you gave us fully fleshed out chatacters, with a fabulous story line... thanks for the long exciting trip..loved your style loved it all. would be a great trest if you took the further...thsnk you for sharing this with us!

I had to reread the entire story to make sure I didn't miss anything.... Great chapter... and worth the wait....

Please finish the story!! Oh man this was such a great read! I want to see how this ends!! Great job!

Cant wait for the next chapter amazing