All Comments on 'Alternate Reality Ch. 02'

Great start to the story,look forward to seeing where it goes. keep up the good work

Could you hurry up and write the next chapter. Ever since I read the first 2 chapters I have been checking every day for the next one. How long do u intend to keep me waiting. I like the build up. I could see some really great action in the making.

First two chapters were fantastic I too have been checking back regularly to see if the next one is up.

Have you stopped writing? Liked this story very much, would love to see more chapters.

Its seems that this is a standard bad hentai setting. I'm sorry but I can't say much else.