by mjm202036
I woke up and realised spelling dracula backwards was extremely foolish and utterly unoriginal and I should have thought up a new name, like Stuart or something. Get over yourself.
To all those that read this story, just know that not even I find this story perfect. But even I knew from the first time I found out the main characters name, I knew that Alucard was Dracula spelled backwards. I do not consider this story very original, because I used some videogame characters. I have even heard that isn't the way Alucard should die. But that is where it is original, tho; because Alucard dies. Besides, I've always rooted for the succubus, even when I've played CastleVania.
I kinda like the idea of a vampire vs succubus encounter.
You did a good job with this story, and I hope that you continue to write.
There were a couple of typos, but nothing that really distracted from the storyline.
Interesting way to describe his battle. I must say it is a nice twist and I have to argee with the author, always liked the succubi in general the best.
I really like the story thank you for sharing it with me and i look forward to reading more of your work
I could definately tell the Castlevania references, being a hardcore gamer myself. I liked the style, but it read like a fan-fic, no offense.
The only thing that stopped me from giving it a 5 was the fact that I'm slightly Jaded, and I would of prefered Alucard to win the fight.
I can't believe Alucard lost! However, I guess if there is anything that could have taken down Alucard himself, it would have to be an all-powerful sex demon like this one.
-Sara
Loved it! That is the way Alucard would be defeated. By a sexy succubus!