All Comments on 'Always, Forever and a Day Ch. 02'

Enjoyed it :) LOL, they are a sweet couple.

It feels like Matt is bipolar. He constantly gets emotional and then giggles 10 seconds later. I think you need to even him out a bit. Make his emotions a bit deeper and less up and down. Other than that they are definitely sweet. I'd love to see a flashback to them as kids.

I love the storyline, could do with a little bit of spell and grammar check though, but that's my only criticism =) I'm loving the cuteness of the couple especially.

Its a great story but very rushed. You definately could have drawn that out more to make it longer. But I loved what you had. Cheers :D

Smashing

Your stories are good, but all three in this series are wayyy too rushed. Still have 4 stars for each tho.