Always, Forever and a Day Ch. 02

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"Me too Mattie me too."

"Lets go home and fuck until we can't walk."

And the boys did exactly that.

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Belle2327Belle2327over 8 years ago
You need to pace yourself!

Your stories are good, but all three in this series are wayyy too rushed. Still have 4 stars for each tho.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Smashing

Contest4JenContest4Jenalmost 13 years ago

Its a great story but very rushed. You definately could have drawn that out more to make it longer. But I loved what you had. Cheers :D

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Pretty Good

I love the storyline, could do with a little bit of spell and grammar check though, but that's my only criticism =) I'm loving the cuteness of the couple especially.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

It feels like Matt is bipolar. He constantly gets emotional and then giggles 10 seconds later. I think you need to even him out a bit. Make his emotions a bit deeper and less up and down. Other than that they are definitely sweet. I'd love to see a flashback to them as kids.

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