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Click hereElsa showered while I caught the end of the late news and the sports wrap-up. After turning off the TV, I rinsed out her coffee mug and set it on the dish rack to dry, then turned off the ceiling lights, leaving the living room in semi-darkness, lit only by the single lamp I'd left burning.
Elsa came to me in that warm twilight. She came to me as I stood in the kitchen, out of sight of the hallway, and she kissed me, draping her arms over my shoulders and pressing herself up against me. I kissed her back lingeringly, my arms encircling her waist. We held each other, quietly, for a few minutes. We whispered our love to each other. And then, reluctantly, we went to our separate beds.
I lay awake for a long time on the floor, staring up at the gloomy ceiling, listening for the sound of Elsa's breathing. She was too far away for me to hear anything, though. I tossed and turned, trying to keep my movements subdued just in case I disturbed her. But she wasn't having any more luck getting to sleep than I was, it seemed, judging by the rustling of her sheets that started up shortly after I'd started shifting about.
I held still, lying on my side, facing away from Elsa's bed. This is ridiculous. Go to sleep. There's more work to take care of tomorrow.
But—
No. You can't spend every night in Elsa's bed. Grow up. Stop thinking with your cock. As nice as it would be... as nice as it would be...
Behind me, Elsa kicked at the sheets, letting out a quiet sigh. I heard her moving then, heard her feet touch the carpeted floor. And then I felt cool air on my back as she lifted my quilt and slipped in behind me.
"Elsie—" I started, twisting over to face her, but she pressed her lips against mine, silencing me. Her tongue slipped into my mouth, and we kissed deeply for far too short a time before she drew back.
"Shhh. I won't stay. But... just for a while, while it's just us...?"
I nodded, my planned protest having only been half-hearted at best. I slid my arms around her and drew her to me. She bent her head and laid it against my chest. I kissed her hair. "Good night, beautiful one."
"Good night," she whispered, her voice barely audible, muffled against my chest. "Good night... darling."
- COMMENTS
Rancher46over 1 year agoWell-structured and written incest story between brother and sister who have come together after having the family of 3 cast out to fend for themselves. It will be interesting to see where this wonderfully written series ends up. 5/5.
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoStill really good so far! Though it pains me to read it and watch them suffering through bits!
My first thought was why even bother shopping for a mattress right now, lil sis didnt blink an eye at sis sharing her bed with brother instead of making him suffer on the sofa, and why would she? Perfectly sisterly thing to do! :). ...and since they cant afford to pay cash for a mattress, well thats a perfect excuse for them to sleep together longer! Hell, after a while nobody will think much of it, no point in buying a sofa bed even if you save up the money, they always are uncomfortable. (I said ALWAYS, ahem. Cough.;). ...see how long you can go before lil sis asks about it. Then just say, the place is small, we don't mind. Just remember to lock the door if you wanna fuck! Personally I dont think they give lil sis enough credit to not get it and understand! Time will tell! Looks to be fun finding out! Hehe. ...oh, I think theyre over compensating out in public, brothers and sisters hug and hold hands all the time! :). Small kisses too!
trite_readerover 11 years agoI respectfully disagree with SmallTitFan. The writing is excellent, and I've yet to see much in the way of editing mistakes. Certainly not enough to detract from the reading in any way. One of the very few writers (on this site) who understands the correct use of ellipses, quotation marks, dashes and hyphens. Perhaps it's a location thing? Without getting too deep or technical, maybe the language the author is using is British / Australian?
What a good read though!
SmallTitFanabout 14 years agoYour writing style is good but it can be improved. The storytelling is excellent; you need an editor primarily for technical assistance. This is intended as constructive criticism and not as a complaint. I rated your story five stars.
