All Comments on 'Always Home Ch. 05'

Another amazing chapter to the story. Can NOT wait for the rest of them!

No, I knew the tension in Ch. 4 would be simply a prelude to more intimacy in Ch. 5. And I knew that the writing would continue to be at this high level. Splendid work.

Just read these 6 chapters and was impressed by the feelings of reality and truth. Can you get back to the story and finish? It has the makings of a fine novel, and made me really care about Ger and Elsie and Marnie. You should not leave them hanging, but give them an ending of some sort - hopefully positive, since they are good people and deserve the best in life.

A most interesting and realistic story with more story than sex. It could be real even if it is just in thought. It was nice to read a story with personalities and not just people.

Make-up sex is the best isn't it. And I love that Elsa is an old soul with excellent taste in music.

Great job as always.

This series is one of the best I've ever read here.

Real characters with real emotions.

Excellent, well written with a great storyline. 5/5