All Comments on 'Always in My Life Ch. 02'

Can you write quicker please? im sick of waiting for the next installment already haha

out fucking standing. hope too see more soon

God, i love Aussie lingo makes me feel right at home, keep it up wanna read more of this.

Thanks

Marco

another hot part of this very romantic story.

im loving this story. and will go on reading it as long as there's more add to it. reading this is awesome.

What!? Did a 14 year old write this? I mean what he is saying. He is spelling out he loves the women and she is sitting there clueless. I love how there grabbing the ass is fine but hand on the thigh was pushing it. Really now? Don't get me wrong I like the idea your getting at but poorly put together. I mean read your script and they sound like they came out of high school. Not to mention I hate the name Little One. It what I call my 3 year old niece.

Ignore your horrible commenters. If they cannot be man enough to reveal who they are and cower behind the cover of anonymous then they are not worth it. Love forever and always, jezz

nice story, but I have to say, you're not a good writer (since you're still quite young, I'd say you'll probably improve in zime, so keep practising.)

There are some inconsistencies (for example, one doesn't need to study to be an accountant and what does it mean, that Beth studied science - there are dozens, hundreds of different sciences, you don't study it in general).

And i think her reactions as a rape victim are a bit cliché, surely her behaviour would be more subtle.

But with a bit effort, you'll do fine!