All Comments on 'Always Read the Contract'

Should be in bondage

But Karma is a cold, cold bitch, as I suspect you'll find out when the responses and ratings continue to roll in.

Not a fan, sorry

Lame piece of amateurish crappola.

... when he realizes it is his father raping his throat he should have bitten off a chunk and spat it across the room

If you post more stories like this, put a disclaimer that your story includes homosexual sex. Otherwise those interested in incest erotica will more likely than not react negatively against your stories labeled as incest/taboo. Either that or have the mom be the dom fucking her son and then using his cock as her personal dildo if you are going to do a rewrite.

Welcome to lit. As you probably know by now, this section is mostly visited by straight men. Who usually don't enjoy surprise gay sex. Watersports also gets mixed reactions. And reluctance is a safer bet than straight up nonconsent.

The story itself is skillfully written, but next time use the tagline/short description to make it clear gay sex is going to be had. Tags are not enough, since those get displayed at the bottom and thus are only relevant if the reader gets here through Search, not the front page.

This story is really good, I love the story line an would like to see similar stories x

I really liked this story. It's fits into a lot of my kinks. I'd like to see more from you.