All Comments on 'Alyssa Chooses a Master'

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Sexilexi2017Sexilexi2017about 6 years ago

This story was freaking amazing !!!! Pleaseeeeee keep writing !

prinnaveaprinnaveaabout 6 years ago
Yes Amazing

story, at a certain point I kinda knew the outcome, maybe. Kudo's to you

KingBandorKingBandorabout 6 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

I had debated on the final resolution a bit, but settled on this outcome. I had basically 2 different ways it could end and they were similar.

tkh3nkey2110tkh3nkey2110almost 6 years ago
Holy Shit!!!

That was great! Although I had an inkling to the ending I was unsure. A well told story with a lot of descriptive suspense. Provocative.

sober71sober71over 4 years ago
Brilliant

Loved it from start to finish,I enjoy your writing and have followed you for sometime now, keep up the good work.

5*s always

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Back after a long time. I've not posted since the pandemic. I was inspired to write a bit more, so keep an eye out for more. Much of what I write about comes from experiences I've had, places I've been and people I've known. Born in the 60's. Came of age in the 80's. Living l...