All Comments on 'Alyssa's Adulterous Adventure'

by PogueMahone

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sherlock40sherlock40almost 19 years ago
Very improbable start. Not realistic at all.

Once again, another blackmail victim that appears to have had a lobotomy so that only her pussy is doing the thinking now. Now, she could do the smart thing. Confess to her husband, beg him for forgiveness, ask for his help with her blackmailer, get even with the blackmailer and then work out their problems together. But then there wouldn't be a story, would there?

gizzmo301gizzmo301almost 19 years ago
Good

good start, what happens next, dose she tell hubby and confess and ask forgivness, or dose she do what Nick wants until hubby finds out and kicks her out... more please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Story was okay--

While I agree with some of the comments, the use of blackmail could be very effective. Have any of you watched the news lately about what happens to teachers who stray outside the communities boundries of "Normal". They usually end up being villified at school board hearings and crucified in the press. So maybe the story line is stretched a little bit--that is what fantasy is all about. I would like to see her talk to her husband and the both of them try and get her out of this situation. Then figure out what will happen between themselves. Thanks, JimDinMN

a real jrkoffa real jrkoffalmost 19 years ago
Its in the Telling...

I agree, I have seen blackmail used time and again as a plot device on this site. However, some stories are told well and some are not. This one, strangely captured me. I'm not sure what I liked about it, but I did like it. I supposed it is in the telling of the story. This one is told well. Jacked off twice during it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Well I liked it

maybe it is an old theme, but I loved the story. It had me hard in no time. Can't wait for volume 2. I can feel Alyssha having to take on more than one guy next time, and who knows even a another woman.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Good, but could have been better

So his wife left with the daughter. Perhaps he is looking to start another family? And with a woman he already knows and lusts for? Nothing wrong here, perhaps they can meet again in another continuation and develop a very serious affair, of course without birth control?

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Great story!

Loved the story. Can't wait for part 2. The story was well written and exciting. Got the blood flowing in all the right places!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Good Start

Got my juices going- where is Part 2

Katie in NEW JERSEY

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Why was she wondering?

Any fool can answer her question.... Divorce and the replacing of a good reputation with that of a cheating slut is the only answer possible. Hope she starts charging soon. But maybe she will realize that when she no longer has a husband to use a s a reference point for her social status.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Not Finished! After 13 years, it’s most unlikely the author will write Part 2.

And Finish The Damned Story is dead! So 1 star,

26thNC26thNCabout 4 years ago
why

Why would a wife and.mom be at a porn store. Now she's nothing more than a whore at the porn store for shore.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
why don't you finish your stories

Your stories would receive 5 stars if you would just finish them. You always leave the reader wanting more, and you don't deliver.

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