All Comments on 'Alyssa's Busy Morning'
by apple21
- 12 Comments
Anonymousover 12 years agodelete and never post again total trash this site is really going down hill fast.
Anonymousover 12 years agoGeez the reason I read on this site is the content is usually better but if all the stories are gonna be like your trashy story forget about it. Grow the f*ck up before writing another story
Phantom1925over 12 years agoStories like this are typical of how Literotica is seriously going downhill in quality of stories. Why do these half-assed submissions even get approved? But then they do allow Samuelx to post his retarded ramblings......
Anonymousover 12 years agoI didn't particularly care for the story b/c I prefer a bit more eroticism than just reading about sex and perversity. However, this is your story, not particularly offensive (unless you don't like reading about incest but then why read here?). Don't worry about people so filled with hate and anger and enjoy yourself b/c there is probably someone who enjoyed reading your stuff:)
-for you angry people, I am not hiding behind "anonymous" just can't remember my login
Anonymousover 12 years agoI actually enjoyed this as a first attempt. As someone else wrote, ignore the haters. You keep writing, I'll keep reading.
Anonymousover 12 years agoYa got a fucked up definition of hater. How about this? Haters: assholes who don't like others having the right to express their opinions.
Anonymousover 12 years agoI didn't think i could hate anyone's stories as much as I hate samuel x's and clinton 09's...congrats for joining that list of pathetic writers.You could have done so much more with this yet didn't.How sad
Anonymousover 12 years agoi masturbated to this this was sooo good i even tasted my cum after .. my sister came in and i fucked her so hard!
Anonymousover 8 years agoThis was a pretty good concept for the story. Please ignore all those who hated it- like some others have said, there are people who liked it :). I would advise you to keep on going with this story- I'm waiting for the next one!
cr3mp13over 6 years agoReally loved it. It had loads of my fetishes in it (no panties under short skirts, public sex, walking with cum running out of pussy)
Forget the haters and keep on writing!
