All Comments on 'Amanda Adams becomes My Queen Ch. 16'

Thank you, Shy. That was an excellent interlude. It's sad that many won't be able to appreciate it because no genitals were involved. Personally, I find scenes that set the table every bit as erotic as the meal. They also make reading passages that aren't my kink much more palatable. I look forward to the continued torments of Buttercup.

I had to write this chapter despite the feeling that it would polarize the people who find the time to read it. Buttercup was a blank that needed filling-in. So... oh well.

To the guy that left the negatiive comment, who's fault is it that you read this chapter? Did you not see that it was chapter 16? And then you took the time to write a paragraph articulating your dissatisfaction with- not my taste- but rather the main character's. I feel for your therapist. Good luck with your severe poverty of decision making abilities.

Well written and quite interesting. Now I shall revisit chapters I may have missed.

Of course I do not quite go for the feminization, or, diapers, but, you are an exquisite writer, and, I love, love, love, these chapters. I hope to hear more like this in the future. Thank you.