by Tallnhard1
I think that this is a great story. Amanda seems like a great lady to make your girlfriend, if you like shemales of course!
I love the story so far. But I found a bunch of typo and other errors in this chapter. Your first chapter, I did not see many errors. You need to have someone check it over and edit the story before you submit it. But the story was good regardless of the errors.
love your story, so full of love and erotic. Please continue, look forward to more
I really enjoy your series! I can only dream of meeting my own Amanda. Please continue with this series!
Thanks!