All Comments on 'Amanda Jane Pt. 02'

This was hot. A bit forceful for me in places but that got resolved nicely in the end.

One hot and sexy shower scene . well written and it left me wondering if these 3 get together in another chapter

Hi stroudle, and thanks for your generous comment.

Another chapter 'is' the plan... but it's likely to be a while coming (it's still in its gestation period at the moment ;))

I do have a couple more in progress though.

Watch this space (and thanks again).

Another great story. Wonderful. I too hope there will be more...

To be constructive, though. I felt it has been bit rushed towards the end. There has been huge build up in the first chapter and at the beginning of this one but then things have been going rather fast... Also, it is really long and there are people who prefer reading shorter parts. I think that this chapter could have easily been divided to two chapters. But that does not change anything on my ratings for this - 10 stars!!!

Perfect! Thanks for the great fantasy.

Finally on Literotica, a story that is actually erotic and not just a mindless jumble of dicks and pussies.

I really wonder how some of the crappy stories get ratings so close to 5.

Nicely done, Iove your style. Not rushed, and great seduction

That was a great story and a great mind behind it!!! Great writing Macey!!!!!!

Detailed without being boring, explicit while remaining so, so erotic. You have a wonderfully dirty, sexy mind, and you write so well: the very slow scene-setting leading up to the wild and passionate sex.

I felt as if I was there with you, sharing the smelly, sweaty excitement. More stories please!

I really liked that story, apart from the rape bit, that was a bit too rough for my taste, however this was a very well written story and I enjoyed reading it.

Excellent story; especially the Lesbian rape. Jane knew Amanda needed a strong Lesbian to make her feel Fem with girls. Wonderfully sensual and real.

Hardly ever do I read lesbian rape situations within sex and I loved it

Hi Macey

Fantastic writing...so very sensuous.

Made me cum so hard...loved it.

Dom

I wish I could write detailed sexual encounters as you do. You're one of the few LitE writers who can arouse me.

Loved it, up to the 'r' word. Not comfortable with rape of any kind, even if it's then described as 'play'. The characters really worked, especially Amanda. So it was heading for a deliciously solid 5*... but after the 'r' I could only give it 4*.

I love your writing and your style, please keep up the great work

You write so well and the sex scenes are so good but as below I wish you didn't use the word rape or even imply it. I'm afraid that isn't even a case of individual taste in my opinion. I will continue to read your otherwise excellent stories, thanks

Macey, is this some part of your past? If so, are you writing a diary or is your memory so exclusive connected to your "moulin rouge " times, nightly activities ...... So you're not just studying to gain knowledge in fact for society activies, you're enrolled into jane club as well for physical knowledge and fitness activities ..... Tough lifetime ..... ;)

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