All Comments on 'Amanda Pays the Rent Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
crap

nothing erotic at all just plain old crap.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Anyone who writes this type of garbage...

Has to be seriously subhuman and suffering from acute moral collapse.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Ignore the haters

Its part 1 and if they don't like what they're reading they can stop. Good start. Can't wait to see what happens next.

LifterupLifterupabout 12 years ago
The things Moms will do!

Good story. Moms will do anything for the children, bet it happens more often then not in these hard times. Lets see where Part 2 goes?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Haters gonna Hate

i luv this story totally hot and anyone who doesn't like it can stop reading!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
WOW

Anyone who doesn't like this story can bugger off. I think it was a very good start. Can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Please continue

This was hot. You have to continue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Great story

Great story, cant wait for part 2.

LittleprickLittleprickabout 12 years ago
Keep it up

Good story. I want to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Keep the Story Cumming

Great story I look forward to reading more! Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Amanda Pays the Rent Great start so keep it coming. Starting with Terry

cumming in Amanda's mouth,a lactating lady needs lots of protein. Whenever you cum in a new mouth it's always a huge load. My wife had orgasms when I sucked her milk,we had 3 boys and I think I sucked more than all 3 combined did. The best part was Joan would suck me dry after I sucked her dry.My cream for her milk,now that's a real win/win, Joan's milk is long gone so it's now my cream for her cream as we 69. A woman needs protein as she ages,I'm a good husband and give her all I got. Add many chapters to this story,I miss Joan's milk. LT

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
5yes more

Yes more titt Milk a love it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Why did you not continue?

You are a find writer and this could be a very long and exciting story. I love stories like this and search for them here. Please keep writing more and more and more....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
let's see how this goes

Add a hero to the story. I think we'd all love to read that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
The story has great potential

This is the beginning of one of the stories, which can just go on and on.

Quite a few chapters could be dedicated to how Terry makes her do new and filthier things.

And then how he starts sharing it with his friends and really makes her a fucking cow. Till he actually makes her a slut for everyone.

But the story writer needs to be subtle in his handling the story, he has been too brash, needs to tone down - before Terry makes Amanda feed her baby, he is already grabbing her!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
No

Didn't work Has to be a story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Gross

Asshole

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

I would actually love to read all the parts!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Don't understand why people complain...

about non-con stories being gross and immoral. Do they understand that's the point of this category? That said... this story makes for an intriguing fantasy. Wish it could be updated sometime.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Where's the next parts!!

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