by SearchingCouple
Great story. Great place to stop. My dick is hard, I joyfully await the next chapter.
You defined Amanda quite well without letting the story drag. I found it easy to believe she wished to loose her innocence. And Natalie brought great dimension and spice to the play!
This is a great, fun, and very erotic read. Like the others, I too wait with anticipation to learn how you will have these ladies tantalize us to passion filled orgasm. Get busy!
the creativity and insight into such compelling fantasies!!! Fantastic!
Wow you guys can write.
Very well put together at a nice pace and with nice little insights into the growing desires and her slide into a more liberated sexuality.
Looking forward to more x x
Well written. An exciting and developing story. Please could we have part 2?