All Comments on 'Amanda's Past'

Please finish this!

This story is in violation of the submission guidelines regarding sex with minors. The first sex scene in the story is child-rape; she was 17 years old at the time. Although it continued after her 18th birthday, it was described in vivid detail when she was a minor. I doubt this is something you want grown men jacking off to. Aside from that, I thought it deserved 100. It's a big "aside" though, and an utter waste of your talent to even include a kiddie porn scene in what could have been a very good story.

That's it? There's so much potential for this story that the ending feels more like a cliff hanger than an actual ending. Did you get bored halfway through or was this the way you wanted it to end from the start? Inquiring minds want to know.