All Comments on 'Amanda's Super Day'

Very erotic story!

Good start. Do not leave your poor boss hard. This could be a good series. Playing the boss against the Super. Making the Super someone like an author that was writing his first novel. He took the Super job to have time to write.

well done!!

Luved it! Beautifully written, tasteful, and erotic!

wonderfuly done . . . mm yess

Ahh, my dear friend, you finished it! After your first draft vanished, you sounded so disillusioned that I was afraid you wouldn't rewrite the story, and I was sad for you. There are few things more depressing than spending hours and hours on a document, only for it to become lost or damaged. But you put your mind to rewriting it, and I'm thrilled that you did! You remembered your plot and details very well; the finished story is surprisingly close to the original one that went *poof*.

You have a knack for telling a story, and your endings aren't what the reader is led to expect they will be. That's what good writing is; telling an interesting tale in a way that keeps the reader engaged and with a twist thrown in here or there. You should write more. I personally wouldn't have minded one bit if Amanda and Mike had extended their lovemaking session well into the wee hours. But if a sequel isn't in order, entertain (and arouse) us with another hot fantasy, will you? xo

Please post more of your stories

Excellent read. Love the details and commingling..

Wow!

Well written story and compelling story line. Will Amanda really give up that car, and submit to Ed? Seems so, but Amanda is a complex woman with an equally complex libido.